HL Essay: Exemplar 1 (Women's Health)

Here is our first HL Essay exemplar. In the coming weeks and months, we will publish more. This one derives from the study of 'Women's Health', a non-literary body of work. The text type is 'front covers' - the notion of 'body of work' requires, in part, that students consider one text type only. The student struggles in a few areas, including focus, and making connections between the extract and the body of work. In other regards, the essay has some considerable strengths. For this page, we provide the essay, and the essay with comments.

 Sample HL Essay

Sample HL Essay with teacher's comments

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