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Editing development paragraphs

Below you will find three sample responses to questions from the developmental psychology option. Each of the responses would benefit from feedback on how the writing could be improved.Read each paragraph and then give feedback on what is missing, what might be incorrect, or what needs to be explained in more detail.Prompt: Discuss the potential effects of deprivation or trauma in childhood on development.

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