May 2023 Paper 2: Sample Response 4 (Question 1)

Thursday 8 February 2024

This is the 4th Paper 2 we are publishing for the revamped English A: Language and Literature course.  Kindly note that a couple more Paper 2 exemplars will follow before the May 2024 exams. 

You can find the newest exemplar here It’s excellent, scoring 28 out of 30 total points, and comes in at a whopping 2,400 words!  The post will explain more, but if you are looking for what is possible – at the very top end of Paper 2 – this is it.  Due note the exemplar may be daunting for some of your students and so use it judiciously.  If they need a push, perhaps this will light that fire.  If reading this will deflate them and cause a crisis of confidence, don’t give it to them.  You know your students, your context, and what they need. 

The student answered question #1 from the May 2023 Paper 2 exam: Referring to two works you have studied, discuss how the writers portray the significance of a journey.

Finally, if you are looking for what we have previously published, you can find them under the “May 2023 P2” heading.  For ease of reference, you can find the 1st exemplar here with the accompanying lesson plan here.  And you can find the 2nd and 3rd exemplars here and here with the accompanying lesson plan here

Best,

Tim and David


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